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Post by Chase Heartle / Flames on Jun 17, 2006 21:49:24 GMT -5
Name - Chase Heartle Alias - Flames-which most people don't know only the people that have seen him in flames like the newspaper named the man in flame, flames but no one knows it Chase Age - 17 Gender - Male Side - Evil/neutral He is not determained to kill people or world domination but he won't be shoved around and if he really wants something he will go get it Power/Skill - He is a lot like Flame On from fantastic 4 he can make fire turn into fire, get extremely hot and hit supernova destroying the world (but he wouldn't), fly and mold fire into like fire balls and throw them basicly anything with fire. APPEARANCE- Height - 6'1
- Weight - 162
- Eyes - brown
- Skin - tanish white
- Hair - brown
- Clothing - green volcom shirt and his pants
- Distinct Markings - none
- Picture - Really is me in real life btw
Strength - Fire or when he gets angry Weaknesses - water can cool him only when hes on fire though but if he's hot enough it will have no effect... And the one weakness every man has...WOMAN Pets - none Personality - Fun, likes to hit on girls ussally getting smashed and parting with friends getting into trouble like stupid trouble things nothing too serious... History - He went to school in brooklyn after his parents died and he lived with his uncle who was an alchoulic and they fought all the time once he turned 15 he left the house and was on his own ever since he was offered for the program of the liquid beta when he was almost 17 and had nothing to loose soo he took the chance and now who knows what lies ahead for him
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Post by Samantha on Jun 18, 2006 9:03:26 GMT -5
Uh...I think for your "side" it would be neutral since being evil is wanting to destroy the world and everything with it. xP And there's already alot of "controling" of fire and such, and so your power seems a bit too powerful. There has to be a weakness of some sort. And you can only have one power. ^^
Add more to the history and your experience in the lab. (maybe explain your strength of getting angry, cause that seems to be confusing) And if it helps, you can run it through Word to find your spelling mistakes. You seem to have a couple of those.
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Post by rossaaron3 on Jun 19, 2006 21:35:33 GMT -5
Dude you look like my brother's friend Johny!!!!!!! Erm yea..sorry, go back to your editing and decisions.
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