Mark Dan Johnson

[mark]

Name - Mark Dan Johnson
Alias - Marco
Age - 16
Gender - Male
Side - Good
Power/Skill - Super Hearing can hear from far away

APPEARANCE

• Height - 5'4
  
• Weight - 115lbs
  
• Eyes - blue
  
• Skin - White but now he is brown from the sun
  
• Hair - brown
  
• Clothing - A T-Shirt with blue Jeans
  
• Distinct Markings - A scar on his right arm
  
• Picture - none
  

Strength - He has a super hearing
Weaknesses - He isn't really Strong so he doesn't fight much.

Pets - Bird - Johnny(fights with him if MArk is in trouble)

Personality - He is a sweet man with a heart. He loved children, animals, and most people. He loves to read and to be alone with nature. Hes a lover, but he will fight if its needed. He is a fun loving, routy boy with time to spare.

History - Mark was born and raised in NYC after his parents didn't want him he got to the gouverment. He got in a cage and suddenly he saw Lilly breaking out with the rest.He warned them with his hearing that soldiers were on the alley and so the looked out for them and got away. After they escaped I left them. I found a wounded eagle and I helped him and he joined me on a journey. Now He is looking for Lilly and Friends to help them like he did with the escape

[Samantha]

Explain how he isn't poweful/what do you mean by fight with him/add more to history/fill out clothing [what he wears]

[mark]

Is it ok now

[Samantha]

Why is your alias Samantha? o.O Alias is what everyone calls you by. Ex: Bobby-> Bob
And your didn't fill out your skin and describe him more in personality. Please?

[mark]

Better now Sam

[Samantha]

i REALLY think that you should add more and describe everything in the history. It seems to little to me...